Changing my last Storyboard scene

The left photo shows the original drawing I did of the fossil depot and as you can instantly tell is the perspective looks a little off. The reason I originally drew it like this was to match the original source photo of what Anning's Fossil Depot looks like, for example here it is shown below. 


I wanted the drawing look similar with the depot being on the corner, however, it doesn't look very effective or like the original. So, I recreated the last drawing so that the perspective isn't as strange. It definitely looks a lot better and less uneasy to look at. I change the background colour from black to white mainly because it looked too gloomy.  Here is the new drawing on it's own;

This drawing is definitely nicer to look at. its very simple but you can tell that it's Mary Anning standing in front of her new house and depot for fossils. In the front window is the ichthyosaur fossil she is most proud of finding. 

Here's what the drawings all look like together with the last drawing changed. In this storyboard I wanted to show what it would look like with both watercolour and just a simple pen drawing.