Life Drawing- Painting inspired by Humprey Ocean

This Life drawing wasn't what I pictured, I don't think it looks like the relative I'm drawing and doesn't use bright colours like Ocean does. Although I spent a lot of time on this drawing I don't think that the outcome is very good at all. I painted this on a A2 canvas and overall, it uses some technique that Ocean does but it difficult to tell it's inspired by his style. In one of Ocean's paintings the head smaller than the body and the shape is oddly proportioned so I tried to imitate this however, I think my recreation isn't like Ocean's. The tones in Ocean's painting have a lot grey undertones in it so I replicated that and I do think that it's similar to how his would paint. I tried to paint the tones in sections, similar to how Ocean would I partly did it but I found it difficult to make it realistic, if I was to do it again I would ask my relative to wear brighter clothes as I think thats a huge aspect of Humphrey Oceans work which is lacking.

 

Example of Humphrey Ocean's work. Alchetron.